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Enid was out for her usual morning wok when she took a wrong turn and found herself in the
woods. She tried to retrace her steeps, but soon realized she was loss. She began to panick, but then she
remembered her training and startled using her knows to sniff out a way home. She met all kinds of
creatures along the weigh, but she was too sacred to speak to theirs. Even tually, her nose led her to a
house made of dog traits. It looked delicious, but she knew better than to eat anything she found inn the
woods. suddenly, an evil which appeared and tried to trap Enid in the mouse. But Enid was to smart for
her and used her nose to found the door and escepe. She was finally home safe and sand, and she bowed
never to wonder off the path again.
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Enid was on her usual morning walk when she took a wrong turn and found herself in the woods. She tried to retrace her steps, but soon realized she was lost. She began to panic, but then she remembered her training and started using her nose to sniff out a way home. She met all kinds of creatures along the way, but she was too scared to speak to them. Eventually, her nose led her to a house made of gingerbread. It looked delicious, but she knew better than to eat anything she found in the woods. Suddenly, an evil witch appeared and tried to trap Enid in the house. But Enid was too smart for her and used her nose to find the door and escape. She was finally home safe and sound, and she vowed never to wander off the path again.