Question
Tess wants the following sentence to be dialogue that helps to develop the suspense of the story.
Which sentence would best achieve that effect?
1. "Marnie, you remind me of your mother as a young girl, standing here by the sea."
2. "When I was a boy, I would come and watch the boats toss on the water during storms."
3. "I have seen a hundred or more storms in my lifetime, and I've never seen one look like that."
O4. "Harker's Sound can be a pretty amazing place to live-there's always something exciting to see."
Answer
3. "I have seen a hundred or more storms in my lifetime, and I've never seen one look like that."