Question
Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow
and writing style of a story?
• A. Juan looked at his project and felt proud. He'd worked hard to
make the model solar system look beautiful, and he had done a
good job. Although he knew he would have competition in the
science fair, he felt confident that he had a good chance of
winning.
• B. Juan looked at his project. He felt proud. He'd worked hard to
make the model solar system look beautiful. He had done a good
job. Although he knew he would have competition in the science
fair, he felt confident that he had a good chance of winning.
O C. Juan looked proudly at the project he'd worked hard to make
beautiful and had done a good job. He knew he would have
competition in the science fair, although he felt confident and had
a good chance of winning.
O D. Juan looked at his project, feeling proud, knowing he'd worked
hard to make the model solar system look beautiful and had done
a good job. He knew he would have competition in the science fair.
But he felt confident that he had a good chance of winning.
Answer
D. Juan looked at his project, feeling proud, knowing he'd worked hard to make the model solar system look beautiful and had done a good job. He knew he would have competition in the science fair. But he felt confident that he had a good chance of winning.